When Senator Win Gatchalian was still the mayor of
Valenzuela City, he commended our then department head, Ms. Ahna Mejia, in a
tweet saying that he has the best PIO in nine years!
A PIO, or Public Information Office, serves as the
marketing arm of government units. This office is usually in charge of activities
linked to public relations, such as writing press releases to be sent to news
editors.
A few years back, Miss Ahna huddled her writers, which
was my team, to share her notes from a media relations training attended by PIO
heads of Metro Manila. Based upon her notes and discussion with us, here are
the 9 things to remember to get your press release accepted and published by
editors:
1.
Think like a journalist.
Enough of ‘trapo’ news that overemphasizes
your boss or your office’s well-doing. Provide beneficial information to the
readers.
2.
Be straight to the point.
Leave flowery words to literary
essays. Tell your readers upfront the information that they are interested to
know.
3.
Lead should be around 35 words.
The traditional WH questions for
writing leads are no longer the “in” thing. Your lead composition should entice
the reader to read further.
4.
Make it interesting.
Instead of writing a
documentation-type article, you may choose to create a story that could serve
as a springboard to highlight the significance of the event. For example,
instead of focusing on the inauguration of a new health center, you may say
instead that a health facility is being brought closer to the community.
5.
Tag ownership.
There is no need to namedrop
your mayor-boss in your article to emphasize his value in the completion of the
project. It is obvious that if something is featured at your organization’s news
portal, the attribution is already there.
6.
Cut the corporate talk.
There are different tones of
English. The tone for broadsheets is different for magazines. Avoid using
office jargons when writing a press release.
7.
Write as you speak.
News writing is like story
telling. Do not attempt to use highfalutin words to impress your reader. The
press release is not about you. It’s about the important event. Use of unfamiliar
words may lead to miscommunication.
8.
Be relevant.
Write stories that are of human
interest. For example, the star on your article should be the project
beneficiaries and not the public officials.
9.
Share background information.
Your press release would have
more depth if a historical account is incorporated in the article. Go get some
legitimate figures for your write-up.
Are you still writing your press release in a traditional
manner? It’s high time to switch your style.
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